My narrative

One Day I was at home and when I found a door. I went thru it and then I was in this strange world because there was A dark world and a bright I loved it on the bright side because it had fairies and butterflies. The dark side was very very dark it had these Insects and they didn’t like bright staff like fairies deist. they loved sticks and broken staff in the middle of the worlds there were this. keeper he was the one that looks after the worlds and keep them safe. But one day the king of the dark side wanted the to keep the world dark so he told all of his people Gather up to take the most power of them all. The king of the fairies was not happy when he found out what was happening so he got up and he went to the middle of the world.And that was where the keeper lived he had magic dast and power to keep the world safe when the fairy king got to the keeper he said to him you are in danger the king said so the keeper said no who is going to look after the power of the world he will take the power of the world if he pulls the power to keep the world save it will all go dark so the king got all of his men and got them to guide the tree but when they left the keepers tree was gone dust floating in the air green grass pulling off the ground the mud shaking everywhere and then then keeper done an magic scpal and it went happily ever after.

THE END

Duffy books

Thank you Duffy books for having time to do these for room 12 and 11 and all the other rooms thank you god pleas you.

My what if planet!

My what if planet!

Insert a picture of the planet you created on paper.

Write a paragraph describing your planet. Use adjectives to make your description more detailed. Don’t forget full stops and capital letters.

• Start Writing here:  My planet is a rainbow planet that has colourful staff like the trees and and the cars there is this special circle on this planet this rainbow planet has beautiful rainbow homes and butterflies the floor has patterns under nef the humans there was this Queen she was beautiful she was filled with good rainbows in her body the Queen lived in an rainbow castle it has rainbow shining bright diamonds in her castle she had beautiful beautiful hair she had crile rainbow hair people was happy in planet rainbow land.

cross country

Mr Burt snapped the clappa and I felt very very afraid because I thought Maddi was going to come first but I did I never knew that I would win the cross country I was very scared when I was on the starting line I had goosebumps ever were my legs was struggling and I was so scared.  Cross country was amazing I was so proud of myself and my mum was so proud of me, my mum nearly cried.      

our trip to stardome

Recount Writing with Paragraphs -
Our Stardome Trip

We will talk about how we are going to craft this recount together.

Our Moon is Special

There are many moons in the solar system, but none are like Earth’s. Mars has two tiny moons, called Phobos and Deimos. Jupiter has 67 moons, and they’re all different shapes, colours, and sizes. Saturn has 62 moons, and dozens more tiny moonlets amongst its golden rings. But on Earth, we have just one and we simply call it the Moon.

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You need to write four paragraphs about your trip to the Stardome. They need to have a
topic sentence,
three details,

and a concluding sentence.

Remember! This is a recount - you need to describe what happened on your trip in order.

What did you do, see, and learn during each part of your trip?

To help you, there are some topic sentences to start off each paragraph.

Start writing here:

Yesterday, all the Year 3s and Year 4s got on a bus to go to the Stardom When the year 3s and 4s got onto the bus we were playing hane game and do tricks.

At the Stardome, we learned some really cool things about our solar system. We learned the the sun is a star and planets what they do.

When we weren’t in the Stardome, we were having fun outside. We were on the pack having fun like on the flying fox the weele swig And the chot chot tran.

After all this, we headed back to Point England School. On our why back home we were telling staff to mr moran and mr h and it was fun at stardome.

After you are finished and have proofread, have this checked by Mr Moran, Mrs Moala, or Mr H, and post this to your blog.

Seasons

The Seasons

Write the story into this Doc, the one you just did in your book.

Start your writing here:

Seasons are caused because of these earth's changing position With the sun the earth travels around the sun orbit once a year as the earth orbits the sun the amount of sunlight each place on the planet gets everyday changes slightly this changes causes seasons. We divide the year into four seasons Spring Summer Autumn and Winter. Each season last three months or Summer being the warmest season. Winter being the coldest season and Spring and Autumn being the lying in between the seasons have a lot of impact on what happens from the earth.

The frog. 2017

Jumping out of the tree I saw a floating leaf on top of the water I saw a floating leaf so the slimy green frog was gripping on to the tree.The green slimy frog saw a small cricket floating on a small leaf so the green frog outstretched his tongue.The cricket was looking away so the big slimy frog the small cricket went into the green slimy frogs mouth.The frog went back to his home and he went to have dinner his dinner was a small cricket.

Netball

Netball is a sport that was played in the olden days, everyone enjoys playing this sport.  In the olden days in 1895 people use to call netball women's basketball. At netball people enjoys netball because the J J J

Jamers enjoys it like catching the ball passing it to others and having fun.

Ned show

A yoyo is an ancient toy that children enjoy playing with. 1500 years ago there was yo yo’s and they were old.

People enjoy playing with a yo yo we can share with our family or friends.

The sun

This sun is the largest star the solar system however there are many stars like it in the wider universe the earth just the right distance from the sun but our planets is not too hot or too cold. The light from the sun takes 8 minutes to reach earth . And gives lifes to plants. Astronauts will never be able to land on the sun. It reaches 50000 5000 degrees celsius 100 times hotter than humans can stan. The sheer size of the sun means that the gravitational pull forces all the planets in our solar system to orbit around it billion 50000 years ago the sun has been producing heat and light for a very long time .

Kite Day

Use descriptive words.

You are going to write a recount about what happened yesterday when we made our kites.

Start your writing here:

Yesterday on wednesday we made amazing kite’s,and it was made out of paper, we got some rope and got one size, so we can make a hole into the kite that we made, when we made the hole we put the rope throw it, after when we made it the pain velin went outside to fly our kites up in the air our kite’s were twisting around and twirling.

Kitesurfing

Soaring Through the sky I feel like superman crashing through the waves

I feel like a dolphin. Experience feeling you only get ever so often.

Hopping butterflies tummy. Spinning twirling through the air.

I show the supporters all the tricks I adl to do I can hear cheering and

Screaming from all my supporters. the hardest part about going

Kitesurfing is packing up. Having to pull the kite on a windy day is hard

Work kitesurfing. is sack a incredible sport.

Haunted House pick a path

Haunted House Pick a Path

Use descriptive words.

We will write the 1st paragraph together, then you will write the next paragraph by yourself.  

You’ll be writing about how you get out, make sure you use describing words.

As I walk up to the Haunted House I saw graves, I sneaked around to the back of the house.  The window is cracked but the window was too small, so I kept searching for the door. Through a cobweb filled alley, I see a door, it’s open I walk inside, I hear a baby crying.  I search the house for the baby.  I walk into find a radio on the bench, through the speaker I hear “you’re not leaving here now”.  I run for the front door.  The door is locked shut there is no way out...    

But then I hear claws scratching up on the roof I was following the noise upstairs I went upstairs and I look above me and I saw a something black I went back downstairs and I took a step and then I fell down into a black hole I look around me and I saw stairs I went up them and I pulled the handle up and it took me to the same door that locked me out I was still looking how to open the door but then I heard someone talking and found what I was looking for IT was talking to me and it

The Haunted House

The Haunted House

Write the story into this Doc, the one you just did in your book.

Start your writing here:

In the distance I see dimmed lights. And a old house there is a bridge leading to a house it is an old bridge it has been there for an hundrede of years. Watching every step that I took I slowly found my way across the bridge.

Creeeeek I can hear the noise of the Door opening and the rocking chair is rocking but no one is sitting on it. I slowly open the door and hhhhhhhhhh to be continued

The Running Shoes