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Friday 23 August 2019

If I was In a chocolate factory for 24 hours!!!!!!!!

If I was In a chocolate factory for 24 hours!!!!!!!!



If I was allowed to stay in a chocolate factory for 24 hours I would be happy it is because I could eat how much chocolate I can eat and I will just tell my mum we are doing a 24 hours eating veggies and then she will let me go and she will have no idea what I am doing but that is still bad but at least I am not doing something bad or something that I will get in trouble.



I wish I could go right now it is because I just feel so hungry when I can taste something it is just so tasty and yummy I wish I could just go right now like today and then I would have all of the chocolate in the world and than I would have a full tummy everyday and but not that much because 24 hours is only one whole day so I will stay up late at night.


When my tummy is full from all of that chocolate I will be happy because I will go to sleep and then I will wake up but then I will maybe wake up in the morning so I need to go sleep and hurry up wake up again and then I will be that person who eats heaps and heaps of junk and I will not need any food until I am maybe about 63 because from all of the chocolate I ate and then I will still be hungry again and again until I want to stop because whatever I can smell I want it like then I want it but I don’t really get it so that is super sad.

Wednesday 14 August 2019

Show Not Tell

Show Not Tell


Tell sentence: It was a cold and rainy day.


Show sentence:
On a snowy and stormy day it was not fair because I wanted to play outside but hopefully it was perfected inside because it was sizzling. Inside it was the warmest because we had heaps of playing in the toy room.







Tell sentence: I went to the beach.


Show sentence: One day there was a little girl at the beach and she was 12 years old she was at the beach with her class and then when she was in the water she was drowning and then the teacher went to go and save her as soon as she got saved she went back home and then she went to sleep.







Tell sentence: Carol bought new shoes because hers broke.

Show sentence: One day there was this boy that goes to school with these shoes and then he went to the shop to go and get some new shoes to look cool at school so he doesn't get bullied and he can be safe and sound.

Tuesday 6 August 2019

Cybersmart Task


I love giving post and also things like writing reading and maths it is because I really love writing and that is why I am doing so writing just because we are having fun with our teachers and I love reading it is because I am a writer and also love music and also maths.