Tell sentence: It was a cold and rainy day.
Show sentence:
On a snowy and stormy day it was not fair because I wanted to play outside but hopefully it was perfected inside because it was sizzling. Inside it was the warmest because we had heaps of playing in the toy room.
Tell sentence: I went to the beach.
Show sentence: One day there was a little girl at the beach and she was 12 years old she was at the beach with her class and then when she was in the water she was drowning and then the teacher went to go and save her as soon as she got saved she went back home and then she went to sleep.
Tell sentence: Carol bought new shoes because hers broke.
Show sentence: One day there was this boy that goes to school with these shoes and then he went to the shop to go and get some new shoes to look cool at school so he doesn't get bullied and he can be safe and sound.
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