Narrative Writing

Peephole Narrative

Once a upon time there was a teacher the teacher said to the students let’s watch the P.E.N.N. So when the students was watching the news the teacher said I will do my work. As the teacher walk to the kitchen to have some coffee there was a alien jumping in the widow. The students was helling and the teacher was running they were so sarded. The alien took the teacher a took her up on the school roof the teacher was so seared the teacher said take everything you want just don’t hurt the students. The students called on every phone number on the piece of paper the students was happy that the other teachers were coming. All the teacher other students came to room 9 and 10 and made a plan to stop the alien. The student said some teachers stay here and lock the classroom some teachers come with me to deal with the alien. We found the teacher on the roof and when we saw a alien the students saw a broken spaceship steam coming out. The students jumped out and said give our teacher back then the alien said not till she helps me fix my spaceship then the students said we can help you. So the alien and the students and the teacher helped the alien to fix his spaceship so the alien said thank you. The alien let the teacher go and the school teachers and other students came and said goodbye

                       To Be Continued

This week Me and my buddy was edit my writing and when we were writing Bella and I said that I had no full stops and speech marks. 

And we talk about my writing to fix up the sentient because so it can make sentient because if I din't put my writing on then it won't make sense.