I am a Year 8 learner at Pt England School in Auckland, New Zealand. I am in Room 2 and my teacher is Mrs Ilaoa.
Thursday, 24 May 2018
Choose It Narrative
One day an big bellown was soaring in the sky then when Elizabeth saw bellowns flying in the sky. But when Elizabeth really saw the bellown house she went omg I’m just having a dream Elizabeth said. But when Elizabeth said hello Elizabeth just thought right. Then when the bellown house was coming down Elizabeth went inside the family house Elizabeth saw some people. When Elizabeth saw them Elizabeth failed the family to in the bellow house took Elizabeth to the hospitality.
TO BE CONTINUED
Part 2: When Elizabeth was in hospitality Elizabeth woke up and then Elizabeth said where am I what am I doing here so she the mum that was in the house and she said hay you were the lady in the flying bellow house when Elizabeth was out of hospitality the lady that was i n the bellow house welcomed Elizabeth to meet the lady's family so Elizabeth did then when Elizabeth was tired Elizabeth wanted to go home Elizabeth saw her mum and went to sleep to the next day to finish other day.
TO BE CONTENTED
Part 3:
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Writing 2018
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