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Showing posts with label Writing 2019. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Writing 2019. Show all posts

Wednesday, 14 August 2019

Show Not Tell

Show Not Tell


Tell sentence: It was a cold and rainy day.


Show sentence:
On a snowy and stormy day it was not fair because I wanted to play outside but hopefully it was perfected inside because it was sizzling. Inside it was the warmest because we had heaps of playing in the toy room.







Tell sentence: I went to the beach.


Show sentence: One day there was a little girl at the beach and she was 12 years old she was at the beach with her class and then when she was in the water she was drowning and then the teacher went to go and save her as soon as she got saved she went back home and then she went to sleep.







Tell sentence: Carol bought new shoes because hers broke.

Show sentence: One day there was this boy that goes to school with these shoes and then he went to the shop to go and get some new shoes to look cool at school so he doesn't get bullied and he can be safe and sound.

Wednesday, 3 July 2019

What Do I Like About New Zealand

What Do I Like About New Zealand?



I like about New Zealand is that we have food that is better than anyone else in the whole world. And that we celebrate other kinds of countries and people where they come from. And that we have school to learn create and share and then we can show other people. I am grateful that new Zealand is here because this is a safe country where people can rest and be happy to each other. I am grateful that we have a home to live in and a beds to sleep on because other countries don’t have beds and a home to sleep in. I love new Zealand because we are a family and we protect each other to keep us safe. I am grateful that we have people to take care of us and people to be teachers to help us on our work. I am happy that I was born to help others and to help my friends and my family. I am happy that I have a family to protect me from danger and form warnings and to teach me how to walk around the world to see my other family. I am grateful that we have sports teams to go out and play other schools and sometimes we go to the finals just to have a friendly game just to have fun. I love new Zealand it is because that we have shops right next to our homes and that we have homes next to our friends. I Love school it is because I learn more than I always do it is because I always lien. But then In sometimes don’t lesion so my friends come over and just helps me with my work but do it still. I love our pies in new Zealand because we have that best pies to eat and that other people they have pies but they don’t cook the mice how we do. I love pavlova to because I love the height of it and because I love the puffy bits because it melts in my mouth. I also love the way we love each other and we take care of each other because we don’t want them to get lifted out or they are going to have a sad life. I am grateful that all of us have money to buy soap and body wash and food for their home and they can eat and sometimes that share the food with the poor people.

Thursday, 13 June 2019

If I were a time traveller

If I were a time traveller
If I were a time traveller I would go to Samoa because I want to see what happened when my mum was a little girl. I want to go back in 2008 to see when Mia was born because I want to know what time she was born and what time I was born. My other thing I would do would travel back when Miss Tia was a little girl to see how cute she was because she is my teacher. And also I would traveller back when Miss Tuna, Miss Tia, and Miss Shavian was at point England school because I was to see what they looked like and what sports they were in. I would also go back when there lived flying cars and machine like hover boards and see through phones and old movie theatres. I would also like to go back when the cavemen was alive because I want to see what they looked like and what they were wearing and after that I would see what they eat and what they sleep on to. I would also want to Velveeta when Mrs Koala was a little girl because I want to see if see went to Disneyland because I think she was born in Australia because she always talks about her live in Australia and then me and my friends just try and go away. I also want to go back to when my dad was alive because I want to know what sports he was in and what other things that he participated in.



  If I were a time traveller I would go to Tuvalu because I want to see what happened when my mum was a little girl.I want too back in 2008 to see when Zoe was born because I want to know what time she was born and what time I was born. My other thing I would do would traveller back when Miss Tia was a little girl to see how cute she was because she is my teacher. And also I would traveller back when Miss Tuba, Miss Tia and Miss Shavian was at point England school because I was to see what they looked like and what sports they were in. I would also go back when there lived flying cars and machine like hover boards and see through phones and old movie theatres. I would also like to go back when the cavemen was alive because I want to see what they looked like and what they were wearing and after that I would see what they eat and what they sleep on to. I would also want to Velveeta when Mrs Koala was a little girl because I want to see if see went to Disneyland because I think she was born in Australia because she always talks about her live in Australia and then me and my friends just try and go away.

Friday, 7 June 2019

Healthy Sandwiches



Paragraph 1


I would put in my sandwich cucumber because it has all of the nutrients inside of it. I would put carrot inside my Sammie because it has heaps of juices because it has a healthy nutrients inside of it too. I would put beard inside of my Sammie because it needs to be a bread on top and down bottom of the sandwich because it has heaps of nutrients and heaps of healthy things inside of it too. The reason I would pick these ingredients is because it is healthy and because it is has heaps of nutrients and protein inside of then. I also think that these ingredients is really healthy and because it has heaps of noon fat inside of these veggies I think tomatoes has heaps of nutrients inside of them that is why we need to cut then be four you ever put the tomatoes inside your sandwich and the cucumber has to be cut in pieces because if you just cake the cucumber inside without cutting then that is bad because you can’t eat a cucumber that is 95.4 cm because you can’t fit the cucumber in your mouth because you will choke.










Paragraph 2


My first step to make a healthy sandwich would be seeded multigrain


Bread because it is healthy and because it will make you full. My next step would be lettuce down the bottom because it is a very healthy food to eat and because it is very big to fit down the bottom and it would taste tasty. My next ingredient would be cucumber because you can cut the cucumber up before you put it in your sandwich because if you don’t then it would taste yuck and because you will choke. My 3rd thing I would put in my Sammie would be cheese because the cheese taste nice and because it would be healthy in my sandwich too it is because it fits right in with the other ingredients too. My Then my next one is tomatoes because it has healthy things inside like juices things and protein too because it would be healthy with the other ingredients so it would fit in. my next ingredient would be carrot because it has juices like cucumber and tomatoes and lettuce to and it is because you can grad the carrot or you can cut then in logs so then would be able to fit in your mouth. Then now I would put the bred on top and then this is going to be my sandwich.








Paragraph 3


If or when I am Hungry I would first clear off the benches in the kitchen then I would start getting the Butter, Bread, and healthy vegetables. I get the Butter and the bread then I lay the two bread out but first I need to take the bread out of the packet then I get the butter and open it after when I have opened it it get the knife and I get some butter on the knife and then I sprained it on top of the bread. I get the healthy vegetables then I get the tomatoes out of the fridge and then I lay the tomatoes on top then I get the cucumbers and then I cut then before I put them in my sandwich after that I get the cheese then I put five at least cheese on the top. After that I would get the lettuce and then I would put the lettuce on the top of the cheese so my sandwich would be tasty and yummy so everyone would or could like my sandwich. Then I have finished my sandwich and all I need to do is get to table all set up and then I would get some plates and cups for my sandwich then I would just need to get some friends and have some lunch to start relaxing for the day and I sure hope my friends would love my sandwich and it would be tasty as well.







Paragraph 4





I think what Love or like about my sandwich would be the bread it is because I love the brown bread better than the white bread because I can keep my body healthy and good for the year. My second think I love about my sandwich would be the lettuce it is because the lettuce is so yummy and it is so franchise and it is because I love the sound effect that it makes when I eat the lettuce. My other favourite thing to do when I am eating my sandwich would be that when I am eating my sandwich it would taste lovely and beautiful and yummy it is because it is a healthy sandwich and because it would be nice to be healthy and because it would be good if you do have a healthy sandwich. I healthy sandwich it a good sandwich because if you eat a healthy sandwich then you are healthy and you will not be fat because if you eat your greens and your vegetables because if you do then you will be more healthier and you will be fit and healthy like I said before and after that I love eating my healthy food like carrot.

Friday, 10 May 2019

Table Discussions






I am grateful for God who made me come to life in this world.


I am grateful that I have a mum and a dad to look after me and to protect me to.


I am grateful that I have 5 brothers and 5 sisters that can look after be.


I am grateful that my teacher Miss Tuia helps me learn and focus on my work.


I am grateful that my mum tries her best to look after my siblings


I am grateful because I try my best to not don’t give up.

Friday, 3 May 2019

Nature Table Discussion Term 2



If I could only eat one food for the rest of my life,What would it be and why





If I could eat one thing for my whole life that would be an apple because an apple is something you can eat and something you can drink too. When you bit the apple you can taste the juice inside of the apple and that will be a drink and something to eat at the same time. The only why I picked an apple is because I love apples and because apples will make you be healthy and an apple will make you feel fresh when you eat the apple for you to be fit and feel good while you are eating the apples.

Tuesday, 5 March 2019

Nature's Table discussions



would take my family to tuvalu because my mum was born in tuvalu and she has not been to see them sins 2016. And I would love to go there because there is a beautiful Island and the ocean is like a blue green couleur. I love it when I am in tuvalu because I will be with my family on my mum’s side.










If I could take my family anywhere I would take them to Florida to go to the harry potter world. The only reason why I want to take them to Florida in the harry potter word. It’s because my family is very into the harry potter movies













I would take my family to Zimbabwe because I want them to jump into the water. And go under the waterfalls and go under the water too. I would love to go there because it will be a fun time there. It looks like a strong waterfall because you can see the water hitting the rocks.

Tuesday, 19 February 2019

Describing me



I am confident because I can stand in front of everyone when I am saying my mihi. I am funny because I make my friends laugh in class. I am silly because I pull a face and I get too crazy. I am creative because I use my imagination. I can also use my imagination when playing outside because I can use things from outside to entertain me. I am playful when I play with my brother and his friends. I am sporty because I go for runs nearly everyday.


I am helpful because I help my mum with the house and I help with my sister and brothers.





I am talented because I make plays with my sister and niece. I am healthy because I eat apples and I go for runs. I am calm because when I am angry, I can always calm down.